TEXT: I’d seriously consider re-translating and training the formatting of just some parts of the story. Turning the review into a synopsis, the screenplay into dialogue perhaps? Translate the poetry and song back to waking linear sentences and vice versa. As with good editing, the act of translation can produce results. Just some more feedback for the team, speak later mate, if yum' free...
"I am the voice of the drum kit,"
As they listened in amazement, the voice continued. "The microphone captures the sound of your music and transmits it to the glyphs, which translate the sound into a language that can be understood by the projector."
"For it is the rhythm of the drums that drives the energy of the glyphs, allowing them to create the images that you see on the screen."
credits
from DEEP SCRATCH REMIX,
released March 23, 2023
STEVE FLY (STEVEN JAMES PRATT) 2023.
A full length album by experimental guitar/drum duo: DMC. Pino on guitars, Steve Fly on drums, carving a path into a psychedelic garden. Feat. guests Creature of Rebelmatic. Occupy reflects 2011. Steve Fly
Poet Douglas Kearney and composer/producer/drummer Val Jeanty link up for a a compelling LP that feels like the written word come to life. Bandcamp New & Notable Mar 30, 2021